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전반적인 전개 부분은 괜찮은 것 같은데.. 단조로운 느낌은 피할 수가 없네요. 후반부보다는 전~중반부가 나쁘지 않은 것 같습니다.
GBeat//너 hell song은 들어본적이나 있냐; 그런말 하는 거 보니 원곡 한번도 안들어 본거 같은데,그대로 겁나 잘살렸구만; 단조롭다면 니가 그냥 헬송 노래를 모르니 그러겠지; 후반부에 원래 저런 느낌이다.쯧.
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